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Monday, April 20, 2020
The kids with the dragon
Kia ora, This is called The kids with the dragon writing, Take a look at what I've done so far!!
One day there was 2 little kids with a dragon there names where Lilly and Maxamise. They lived in a kingdom the king was there father and the queen was there mother the lived in a HUGE castle there mother and father got them a dragon the 2 kids had to look after it there self. The mother and father didn’t help look after the dragon. The mother and father sat on there but most of the day the little girl Lilly she was holding a sword. The little boy Maxamise was feeding the dragon. The dragon was nice not scary and mean. They called the dragon Jake. The next day. They went to feed the dragon but he wasn’t there they search every where but nothing. But the boy and girl went of out of the kingdom to look for them they told there mother and father they said if you kids are going where coming the kids said but who is going to look after the kingdom the mother and father said Gaurds are. But some of the Gaurds are coming the kids said WHAT but its just us 4 I now kids but we want to be safe tho right and we don’t won’t to die do we. The kids said maybe so the headed of and a fews days later they where still searching and they found heaps of dragons. It was called dragon land. So they just said aww look its our dragon so they went back with out the dragon the kids said bye bye Jake we well miss you!!
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Hello Nevaeh.
ReplyDeleteYou've put in a huge amount of effort to get all this writing done.Well done.
If your mum was a queen and your dad was a king,that would make you a princess and if you had a brother,he'd be a prince.
When you use the would 'their' you are referring to something that belongs to you.
The children were looking after 'their' dragon.
The other word 'there' is for...The book is over 'there'.
Have a great work and keep up the blogging.