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Tuesday, May 5, 2020

Out of control

Kia ora, This is my out of control tuhituhi, Take a look at what I've done!

Out Of Control
One day I was flying a plane it was a old plane that where in the olden days. It was a snowy day. I was heading to the north pole. When I was heading to the north pole. The plane was OUT OF CONTROL I FRICKED OUT AND SAID SHOT IT LOOKS LIKE IM GOING DOWN. So the plane went out of control and took me down !NOT SAFELY! So we I went down I was fine and I never knew that I was at the north pole already I went in and ask Santa if I can have another plane he said HOHOHO. What is a young little girl doing here. She said IS THAT SANTA. Santa said Oh well what do you need help with?? She said I need another plane to take me home cause my plane went outta control. So santa said we have some planes. So she said Great. Can I use one Santa said sure. So she head home. Untill half-way the PLANE GOT OUTTA CONTROL AGAIN. She said NOT AGAIN I guess where going back down. When she landed the plane disappeared she said Ok I guess the planes gone. She said HELLO anyone here. Somebody said HELLO back. They both heard each other so they run towards the sounds. They looked EXACTLY THE SAME. They both said uhh Hi WHY DO YOU LOOK LIKE ME at the same time. They talk and they said there names the one that was heading to the north pole is Ava the other one that was in the forest is Eva. They both said Hmm my sisters name is Ava Eva. Ava said my sister got lost in the forest to and she was never found. Eva said my sister was fine she said I hope you stay safe Eva and don’t get lost I love you. Eva said Sis? Ava said YOUR NOT MY SIS? Eva said Sis you are my sis and I am your sis. Remember I said to you Be safe and I love you Ava PLEASE ITS ME EVA YOUR SIS. So Ava said Sis? Sis? Sis is it really you Eva said YES ITS ME SIS. So they went and fixed the planes together and they went home. On the way home they where safe :D

1 comment:

  1. Hello Nevaeh.
    Your story ended differently to how I thought it would.You have some great ideas.It kept me guessing and I could almost feel like I was in the story.
    Just remember to use speech marks when people are talking.
    Well done for completing another task.Thank you for sharing your work.

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