The Visitor..
One day there was a tiny world. At 12:00 at night there were big loud noises and people started to look out their window. They sore ROBOTS people locked their house up. But then the robots got closer and closer. The robots said Hmm.. it looks empty here. Come on let's get outta here. So they left when they were leaving someone in the town said hey YOU ROBOTS COME GET ME. But the robots couldn’t hear them so other people came out and said ROBOTS!!! COME GET US!! So the robots here’d them but they disappeared so the robots just went home. The next day Everything was safe until MORE ROBOTS APPEARED. So people came out of there homes and said HEY ROBOTS The robots said Hmm.. Look who finally came out so more and more people came out. But kids stayed in the house. But the robots just left and never came back.
Morena Nevaeh.It has been so good seeing you and koro at karakia in the morning.Some mornings Sam sits with me and we listen to karakia together.
ReplyDeleteYour story ended differently to what I thought was going to happen.I was expecting a fight between the robots and the people.
Here's a little bit of support that might help you with your next lot of Tuhituhi.
saw-is to look
sore-I have a sore arm
heard-listen
Well done on completing another task and thank you for sharing your work.