Kia ora, This is my Professor Plum Tuhituhi, Take a look at what I have done!!
Professor Plum
One day there was a man called Professor Plum. He makes potions. He has a shop called Professor Plums Potion Shop. People don’t really go in the shop until one day Professor Plum made his shop EVEN BIGGER. Since that day people came into his shop and brought potions. The Next Day. People came back to the potion shop. The potions that he made where to make the people that weren’t feeling good if they drank the potion they would feel better fast. But one day his shop was empty. There where no more potions and he was feeling sick. So he walk to his car and put the shop up for rent. But then he moved his shop to another place. He told every one near him that hes leaving. So he left and went to another place he had one potion left it was called the dissapper potion he took it and dissappered.
Kia ora Nevaeh - I LOVE your ideas about his shop. It really fits with the pikitia.
ReplyDeleteI also really appreciate your full stops and capital letters so it's easy to read. What happened to all his potions?
The story ends a bit sadly! I would love to hear more about him and hopefully he becomes happy :) Tau kē
Keep up the blogging